我希望将我的研究生考试面试的自我介绍的稿子润色一遍,使其更流畅,有逻辑,地道,学术化。句子和用词结构...

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我希望将我的研究生考试面试的自我介绍的稿子润色一遍,使其更流畅,有逻辑,地道,学术化。句子和用词结构要简单,避免出现不常见的词和难懂的句子,要朗朗上口。格式保持和以前一样 #page x 内容,markdown形式输出。#page 1
Good morning/afternoon, professors! I am Zhou Shiyang. It is a great honor to attend the interview at Fudan University. I am applying for the Meteorology program.

#page 2
Next, I will briefly introduce myself in four aspects to give you a better understanding of me.

#page 3
I was born in Rizhao, a seaside city in Shandong Province. Since childhood, I have been deeply interested in weather phenomena and climate change. Later, I chose to major in Atmospheric Science at Nanjing University of Information Science and Technology.

#page 4
During my studies, I worked hard and consistently performed well, scoring above 90 in 31 courses. This helped me build a strong foundation in the field. Additionally, I achieved the highest total score and ranked first in several subjects during the preliminary examination.

#page 5
Outside of class, I focused on enhancing my programming skills and English proficiency. For instance, I mastered languages like Python and gained familiarity with numerical models such as CESM through self-study. Additionally, I passed CET-6 in one attempt. All of which strongly support my research endeavors.

#page 6
I actively participated in competitions like mathematical modeling and won multiple awards. These experiences sharpened my research thinking while improving my teamwork and innovation skills.

#page 7
My accomplishments in academics, organization, innovation earned recognition from my university and academy, leading to this honors and scholarships I received.

#page 8
In terms of research, I have a strong interest and have received relatively basic and systematic training. I was a key member of the "National Undergraduate Innovation and Entrepreneurship Training Program Project," responsible for configuring and running the CAMS-CSM model. I also led the "Impact of Greening in the Indian Region on Northern Hemisphere Climate: Processes and Mechanism" project. I will now focus on introducing this research I led.

#page 9
Using NASA GIMMS Leaf Area Index data, I analyzed the vegetation changes in Indian Region over the past thirty years and found a significant trend of vegetation growth.

#page 10
Subsequently, using the CAM-CLM coupled model, I designed and implemented control experiments and two sets of vegetation increase experiments to study the impact of vegetation changes in India Region on temperature and precipitation distribution.

#page 11
To further explore the mechanism, I found that vegetation changes influence local heat exchange processes, thereby affecting local temperatures.

#page 12
These changes trigger circulation adjustments, altering energy and water vapor transport processes, which cause shifts in the distribution of precipitation and temperature.

#page 13
I have always actively participated various academic seminars, and read relevant literature to continuously broaden my research horizons. Regarding the future, I hope to start engaging in research as early as possible to hone my skills. If the opportunity arises, I would like to pursue a PhD so that I can deeply explore the field of atmospheric science.

#page 14
In summary, my core strengths encompass self-motivated learning capability, a solid academic foundation, proficient programming skills, and demonstrated passion for scientific research.

#page 15
I hope to have the opportunity to explore the infinite possibilities of atmospheric science at Fudan University. Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Thought

Formatting requirements

Compiling a concise, academic-style text with simple language and logical structure. Using Markdown for clarity and organization, incorporating headings, bullet points, and bold subjects.

Crafting an introduction

I'm refining the self-introduction for a Chinese student, ensuring it’s concise and respectful in English, highlighting the interview at Fudan University for the Meteorology program.

Streamlining the introduction

I’m simplifying the introduction, making it more concise and direct. The revised version meticulously adheres to the original format while improving the clarity and flow of the self-introduction.

Crafting the text

I’m refining the language to ensure it’s clear and flows well. From introductions to specifics about weather and climate change, and the structure of four main points.

Highlighting achievements

I’m compiling academic successes, detailing high grades and progressive exam scores, while also outlining extracurricular pursuits like programming in Python and English proficiency for research support.

Enhancing research skills

I’m showcasing extracurricular achievements, emphasizing proficiency in Python and numerical models like CESM. Acquiring CET-6 certification in one attempt bolsters the central research theme.

Highlighting honors and projects

I’m noting honors and scholarships for academic, organizational, and innovative achievements. Consulting multiple sources helped refine the text, ensuring clarity and consistency.

Analyzing vegetation shifts

I’m mapping out the trends in India's vegetation using NASA data, identifying significant growth. Then, I delve into vegetation's effects on temperature and precipitation patterns with the CAM-CLM model.

Investigating the effects

I’m examining how vegetation changes influence local heat exchanges, atmospheric circulation, and ultimately, temperature and precipitation patterns. This research helps me understand these transformations comprehensively.

Reasoned about graduate school self-introduction for 20 seconds

Answer

#page 1
Good morning/afternoon, professors! I am Zhou Shiyang. It is a great honor to attend this interview at Fudan University for the Meteorology program.

#page 2
Next, I will briefly introduce myself in four main aspects to give you a better understanding of me.

#page 3
I was born in Rizhao, a coastal city in Shandong Province. Since childhood, I have been fascinated by weather phenomena and climate change. Later, I chose to major in Atmospheric Science at Nanjing University of Information Science and Technology.

#page 4
During my studies, I worked hard and earned consistently high scores, with over 90 points in 31 courses. This gave me a solid foundation in the field. I also achieved the highest total score in the preliminary exam and ranked first in several subjects.

#page 5
Outside of class, I focused on improving my programming skills and English proficiency. For instance, I learned Python and became familiar with numerical models like CESM through self-study. Additionally, I passed CET-6 on my first attempt, which further supports my research endeavors.

#page 6
I actively participated in competitions like mathematical modeling and won multiple awards. These experiences sharpened my research thinking and improved my teamwork and innovation skills.

#page 7
My accomplishments in academics, organization, and innovation earned recognition from my university and academy, leading to various honors and scholarships.

#page 8
In terms of research, I have strong interest and systematic training. I was a key member of the “National Undergraduate Innovation and Entrepreneurship Training Program,” responsible for configuring and running the CAMS-CSM model. I also led the “Impact of Greening in the Indian Region on Northern Hemisphere Climate: Processes and Mechanism” project. Next, I will introduce this research in more detail.

#page 9
Using NASA GIMMS Leaf Area Index data, I analyzed vegetation changes in the Indian Region over the past thirty years. My findings revealed a significant upward trend in vegetation growth.

#page 10
Then, through the CAM-CLM coupled model, I designed and implemented control experiments and two sets of vegetation increase experiments to study how vegetation changes in the Indian Region affect temperature and precipitation distribution.

#page 11
To further explore the mechanism, I found that vegetation changes modify local heat exchange processes, which in turn influence local temperatures.

#page 12
These changes lead to adjustments in atmospheric circulation, altering energy and water vapor transport, and ultimately shifting precipitation and temperature patterns.

#page 13
I have also actively attended various academic seminars and read relevant literature to broaden my research horizons. Looking ahead, I hope to start research as early as possible to strengthen my skills. If circumstances allow, I plan to pursue a PhD to further explore the field of atmospheric science.

#page 14
In summary, my core strengths include strong self-motivation, a solid academic foundation, proficient programming skills, and a genuine passion for scientific research.

#page 15
I hope to have the opportunity to explore the limitless possibilities of atmospheric science at Fudan University. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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