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EG那一句_不改了，先投出去再说

Erstellt am: 13. September 2025

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Frage

“Computational choices also matter: predicted HbA1c has been generated from heterogeneous regressions (e.g., fasting plasma glucose vs. mean glucose monitoring; cohort-specific vs. externally calibrated equations), and HGI has been analyzed as a continuous variable, by quantiles, or by dichotomization—decisions that can alter effect sizes, statistical significance, and even the direction of associations .”这段目前从语言上看自然吗？；
第二个问题：我不喜欢用破折号，去掉破折号之后，给我提供三个不同的修改润色后版本，要自然通顺流畅，并且符合SCI论文的书写水平，不要给这里面的缩略语添加全称（我已经在前文进行定义了）

Gedanke

Assessing naturalness

The original sentence is largely natural for academic readers. Minor tweaks are suggested, like correcting punctuation and enhancing clarity.

Crafting academic sentences

I'm refining the sentences to enhance clarity, maintaining a concise, academic tone without adding expansions. The goal is to ensure natural flow and precise punctuation.

Crafting clarity

Refining sentences to boost readability, ensuring natural flow and precise punctuation, while avoiding em dashes and expansions for HGI. Progressing towards a polished, academic tone.

Offering alternatives

I'm curious about generating three distinct options, ensuring the final sentence is refined and meets specified criteria. Additionally, addressing a minor punctuation detail with the extra space.

Reasoned for 1m 47s

Antwort

下面先给出评估，再提供去掉破折号后的三种润色版本。

评估（是否自然）

这句话整体专业、通顺，逻辑也清楚，读起来基本自然。但有几处可以更地道、更适合SCI写作的微调点：

  1. “generated from heterogeneous regressions”比起generated，学术写作更常用estimated或derived；“regressions”可改为“regression equations/approaches”。
  2. “mean glucose monitoring”表达略生硬，建议改为“mean glucose from monitoring (data)”。
  3. “by quantiles”更常见的写法是“categorized/grouped into quantiles”或“stratified by quantiles”。
  4. 结尾有多余空格（associations .），需去掉。
  5. 你不喜欢破折号，用句号、分号或“Such/These choices…”承接会更稳妥。

去掉破折号后的三个修改版本

不添加任何缩略语的全称（保留HbA1c、HGI等）。

版本一（两句式，稳健学术口吻）
Computational choices also matter. Predicted HbA1c has been estimated using heterogeneous regression equations (e.g., fasting plasma glucose versus mean glucose from monitoring; cohort-specific versus externally calibrated equations), and HGI has been analyzed as a continuous variable, categorized into quantiles, or dichotomized. These choices can alter effect sizes, statistical significance, and even the direction of associations.

版本二（冒号引出，语义对照更紧）
Computational choices are consequential: predicted HbA1c has been derived from diverse regression approaches (e.g., fasting plasma glucose compared with mean glucose from monitoring; cohort-specific compared with externally calibrated equations), whereas HGI has been treated as continuous, grouped into quantiles, or dichotomized. Such decisions may change effect sizes, statistical significance, and even the direction of associations.

版本三（三句式，层次更分明）
In practice, computational choices matter. Predicted HbA1c has been derived using varied regression equations (e.g., fasting plasma glucose versus mean glucose from monitoring data; cohort-specific versus externally calibrated equations). HGI has been analyzed as a continuous measure, stratified by quantiles, or dichotomized, and these analytic decisions can shift effect sizes, statistical significance, and even the direction of associations.

如果你有偏好的动词（如更倾向于 estimated 还是 derived），我可以据此再统一调整。

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