语法检查与修改建议
Erstellt am: 24. Januar 2025
Erstellt am: 24. Januar 2025
这句话,你觉得有没有语法问题需要修改?Sea urchins (Strongylocentrotus intermedius ) are key species in marine ecosystems. They play a significant role in ecology by regulating algal growth and maintaining the balance of benthic communities, and they are widely valued for their economic importance (Chi et al., 2021).
这两句话从语法上来看并没有明显的错误,整体是通顺的。如果只是想确认“有没有语法问题”,那么可以说没有需要纠正的地方。不过,如果想让表达更加简洁、有逻辑性,可能可以做一些小的调整。例如把第二句话拆分或改写,示例如下(仅供参考):
Sea urchins (Strongylocentrotus intermedius) are key species in marine ecosystems. They play a significant ecological role by regulating algal growth and maintaining the balance of benthic communities. Additionally, they are widely valued for their economic importance (Chi et al., 2021).
这样分句会让文章更易阅读,也让“生态作用”和“经济价值”两个方面的内容更加清晰。
但如果只是检查语法错误,原文并无明显问题,修改与否取决于你对行文风格的偏好。
能不能修改成两句话,使其更符合科研表述
可以尝试将原文改写成两句话,既突显它们在生态和经济层面的重要性,也让语言更符合科研表述。示例如下:
Sea urchins (Strongylocentrotus intermedius) are key species in marine ecosystems, playing a pivotal role in regulating algal growth and maintaining the balance of benthic communities. They are also widely valued for their economic significance (Chi et al., 2021).
这句话有没有可以润色修改,使其表述更符合科研表述:The absence of Debaryomyces in indoor aquaculture systems may affect the gut microbial balance of S. intermedius, potentially reducing its digestive efficiency and immune function, and thereby influencing its growth.
可以尝试将句子微调,使其在科研场合读起来更凝练、直接,同时兼顾逻辑衔接。示例如下:
The absence of Debaryomyces in indoor aquaculture systems may disrupt the gut microbial balance of S. intermedius, potentially reducing its digestive efficiency and immune function, and ultimately hindering its growth.
Additionally, it is important to consider the often overlooked presence of fungi in biofilms.这句话中,是often overlooked还是often-overlooked
在大多数学术或正式写作中,通常不需要在“often overlooked”之间使用连字符。连字符更常用于避免歧义或在复杂的复合形容词中帮助阅读,而像“often overlooked”这样的短语通常无须连字符。
因此,你可以直接写作:
Additionally, it is important to consider the often overlooked presence of fungi in biofilms.