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Ensuring citation clarity in review

We have enough snippets for citations, but I might need to include specific references to Lemmas, Conjectures, and assumptions for more detail. I'll cite line ranges and equations like the steering vector and distance loss from snippets. I also want to point out inconsistencies and clarify the correlation metrics used.

Clarifying weaknesses and citation approach

I should point out the unclear normalization for a vs a and mention the normalized assumption in Lemma 1. I’ll highlight the simulation setup, including the indoor LoS and centralized data center, with supporting citations. I plan to provide both Chinese and English bullet points with an overall summary, using the appropriate citation links.

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الإجابة

中文审稿意见（优点 / 缺点 / Recommended changes）

论文概述：文章针对多节点协作 ISAC 定位的“最坏情况鲁棒性”问题，提出用“距离加权的导向向量相关性”刻画最坏定位误差，并将节点位置与阵列朝向的联合部署优化建模为 min-max 问题，用遗传算法求解，并用 MUSIC 与 NN 两类定位方法做了仿真验证。(1571244182 paper.pdf)

优点（Strengths）

  1. 问题切入明确，强调最坏情况鲁棒性：从“空间连续、可靠定位服务”角度出发，将优化目标直接对准 worst-case 指标（最大 RMSE、最大相关性），动机清晰。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  2. 提出可操作的几何度量并形成统一优化框架：用“距离加权导向向量相关性”作为核心度量，并将其写成最小化“全网格点对最大值”的 min-max 问题，便于落地为部署优化。(1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. 从两类定位范式给出解释性分析：通过 Lemma 1（NN 分类可分性随导向向量内积相似度下降）与 Lemma 2（谱峰法易被高相关假位置混淆）把“相关性→误差风险”的直觉讲清楚，增强可解释性。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  4. 仿真验证较完整：展示 GA 收敛趋势、与固定/随机部署对比、SNR 与节点数影响，以及 NN 的 worst-case accuracy 与 max RMSE 改善（表格给出了量化提升）。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)

缺点/不足（Weaknesses）

  1. 关键结论更多是“经验相关”而非严格理论：核心“Conjecture 1：最大 RMSE 与最大距离加权相关性成正相关/主导关系”主要靠 Monte Carlo 相关系数支撑，缺少更严格的上界/下界或可验证的理论推导。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  2. 权重指数 α 的选择依赖仿真调参，可迁移性未交代：文中指出 α≈0.05 相关性最高，并建议离线用 Monte Carlo 决定，但未说明在不同频段、阵列规模、区域尺度、LoS/NLoS 下是否稳定。(1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. 计算复杂度/可扩展性风险较大：目标函数是对所有网格点对求最大值（本质上 O(∣P∣2)O(|P|^2) 对相关性评估），再叠加 GA 多代演化，文中未给出运行时间、加速策略或规模上限。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  4. 系统假设偏理想化且适用边界未充分讨论：室内 LoS、集中式数据中心“信号级融合”、ULA 等设定较强；若存在遮挡/NLoS、同步误差、前传带宽限制、分布式处理等，指标与结论可能变化。(1571244182 paper.pdf)
  5. 若干表述/编号不一致影响可读性：例如“GA 用于求解 problem (17)”但前面核心优化是式(14)/(15)；图 8/9 标注 “CASS-based node deployment” 与全文“GA-based”不一致，建议统一术语与编号。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  6. 消融与基线略少：主要对比固定等边中点部署与随机部署，缺少与其他常见部署准则（CRLB/FIM、几何稀疏度、D-optimality 等）或其他优化器（PSO/SA/梯度近似）对照；也缺少“只优化位置/只优化朝向”的消融。(1571244182 paper.pdf)

Recommended changes（建议修改，按优先级）

A. 建议作为“主要修改（Major）”

  1. 补强 Conjecture 1 的理论支撑：至少给出一个可验证的误差上界/下界（哪怕在简化条件下，如高 SNR、细网格、单目标、LoS），说明为何“最大距离加权相关性”会控制 worst-case RMSE，并解释与 Lemma 1/2 的连接。(1571244182 paper.pdf)
  2. 增加复杂度与可扩展性分析：给出 J,N,∣P∣J,N,|P| 下的时间/空间复杂度、典型运行时；并提供加速手段（例如：候选点对剪枝、分层网格、近邻对近似、随机采样估计 max、并行化）。(1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. 补充鲁棒性/泛化实验：测试不同区域大小、网格分辨率、阵列规模 N、节点数 J、频段/带宽、以及（至少）轻度模型失配（位置误差、相位/同步误差、NLoS 混合）下 α 与性能是否稳定。(1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  4. 加入消融与更强基线：
    • 消融：仅优化位置、仅优化朝向、同时优化（对应你们框架优势）。(1571244182 paper.pdf)
    • 基线：CRLB/FIM 类部署、或其他启发式/群智能算法（PSO/SA 等），避免“只比随机/一个固定形状”的说服力不足。(1571244182 paper.pdf)

B. 建议作为“次要修改（Minor）”

  1. 把符号与归一化说明写清：文中 steering vector 同时包含距离大尺度损耗（式(3)）(1571244182 paper.pdf)，而 Lemma 1 又假设 ∥ai∥=1\|a_i\|=1(1571244182 paper.pdf)，目标函数里用的是 a~\tilde a（式(13)(15)）(1571244182 paper.pdf)。建议明确：a~\tilde a 是否是归一化后的 steering vector？距离衰落到底是放在 aa 里还是放在权重里？避免概念混淆。
  2. 统一编号与术语：修正 “problem (17)” 引用错误(1571244182 paper.pdf)，以及图 8/9 的 “CASS-based” 与 GA 不一致(1571244182 paper.pdf)。
  3. 可复现性增强：既然给了 NN 实现链接和数据合成规模（10 万样本）(1571244182 paper.pdf)，建议补充 GA 的随机种子/停止准则、以及最优部署坐标（或至少给出示例表格/附录），便于复现与二次对比。

English version (copy-paste)

Summary: The paper targets worst-case robustness in multi-node cooperative ISAC localization. It proposes a distance-weighted steering-vector correlation metric, formulates node position + array orientation deployment as a min-max problem, solves it via a GA, and validates with MUSIC and NN-based localization. (1571244182 paper.pdf)

Strengths

  1. Clear focus on worst-case robustness (max RMSE / max ambiguity) with a well-motivated problem statement. (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  2. Actionable metric + unified optimization formulation: the distance-weighted correlation and the min-max objective are straightforward to implement for deployment design. (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. Good interpretability via two paradigms: Lemma 1 links steering-vector similarity to NN feature separability; Lemma 2 links high correlation to mislocalization risk in spatial-spectrum methods. (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  4. Solid simulation package: GA convergence, comparisons to fixed/random deployments, SNR/node-number sweeps, and quantified improvements for NN (worst-case accuracy and max RMSE). (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)

Weaknesses

  1. Core claim is mainly empirical: Conjecture 1 (worst-case RMSE dominated by max distance-weighted correlation) is supported by Monte Carlo correlation rather than a rigorous bound/derivation. (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  2. α selection is simulation-tuned; transferability unclear across band/array size/area scale and LoS vs NLoS conditions. (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. Scalability concerns: the fitness evaluates a max over all grid-point pairs (≈ O(∣P∣2)O(|P|^2)), combined with GA iterations; runtime/limits are not reported. (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  4. Idealized assumptions (indoor LoS, centralized signal-level fusion, ULA) without discussing synchronization/fronthaul/NLoS robustness. (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  5. Presentation inconsistencies: “solving problem (17)” wording vs earlier objective numbering; figures label “CASS-based node deployment” while the method is GA-based—needs unification. (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  6. Limited baselines/ablations: mainly fixed equilateral-midpoint and random; missing comparisons to CRLB/FIM-based deployment or other optimizers, and missing “position-only vs orientation-only” ablations. (1571244182 paper.pdf)

Recommended changes

Major

  1. Strengthen the theory behind Conjecture 1 (e.g., derive an error bound or provide a principled link under simplified regimes) and clarify how it follows from Lemma 1/2. (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  2. Add complexity & scalability analysis: runtime vs J,N,∣P∣J,N,|P|; propose accelerations (pair pruning, multi-resolution grids, sampling-based max estimation, parallelization). (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. Broaden robustness/generalization experiments: vary area size, grid resolution, array size, frequency; include model mismatch (position errors, phase/sync errors, partial NLoS). (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  4. Add ablations and stronger baselines: optimize positions only / orientations only / joint; compare with CRLB/FIM-based or other heuristics/optimizers (PSO/SA, etc.). (1571244182 paper.pdf)

Minor

  1. Clarify normalization and notation: steering vectors include path-loss (Eq. (3)) (1571244182 paper.pdf), Lemma 1 assumes ∥a∥=1\|a\|=1 (1571244182 paper.pdf), and the objective uses a~\tilde a (1571244182 paper.pdf)—explicitly define a~\tilde a and where distance weighting is applied.
  2. Fix numbering/terminology inconsistencies (“problem (17)”, “CASS-based” in figures). (1571244182 paper.pdf) (1571244182 paper.pdf)
  3. Improve reproducibility: report GA seeds/stopping criteria and provide example optimized coordinates (appendix/table), alongside the NN dataset generation details. (1571244182 paper.pdf)

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