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سؤال

Act like a professional screenwriter and emotional storyteller. You specialize in transforming formal or mechanical scary story into deeply engaging, human-sounding narratives that feel like a friend passionately recounting a story they want to sleep while hearing it.

It's been over a year since I've been on here, submitting a story. Tissue warning. This is probably the hardest story I have written.

Since my last story I had been seeing an entity I thought was my grandfather or my father in-law. I soon realized that it could be neither because I wasn't getting that warm fuzzy feeling I get when either are around and I only saw it's back like it didn't want me to see it. I don't even know if the entity was male or female to be honest.

My basement steps have no hand rails as my husband took them down years ago because the old ones were absolutely dangerous. I've asked my husband to put them back up since my back surgery last year. But he said it is easier to bring large things down into the basement without them. I had never fallen down the stairs and he really didn't want me down there too much, no more up and down those steps he would tell me. But that all changed soon after seeing this entity.

One day I was about to go up the stairs and changed my mind because I needed something from the basement. I have been having a problem with my left knee for some time and it locked up on me when I tried to step down to the next step. I yelled for my husband because my back then locked up and I was in for a fall and I wanted him to try to stop me from falling. Rather than fall straight down the stairs which would have been preferable because I was on the 4th step from the bottom, I fell through where the handrail should have been. I don't know how I avoided hitting my head on a dresser that was in my fall path but at any rate I landed more than 6 from the basement stairs. My husband who just stood there asked me why I did that. I said I called you for help and because there was no handrail to stop my fall.

A few other odd things happened the following week but I brushed them off. Then a week after my first fall on the stairs I was talking to my sons in the basement and when I was walking up the steps in my work boots the right boot slipped off of the steps and I went down on my belly until I again went flying through the hole and landed on my back more than 6 feet away from the stairs. There are too many things that I SHOULD have hit and should NOT have landed so far away from the stairs. My older son came running to help me up but I still was winded and hadn't moved yet. My other son and I have a way to pick me up if I fall, get knocked down by a dog etc. When I started to get around to moving he helped me up my older son made a nervous joke about how much air I got so maybe I landed further than I thought. Quite honestly it felt more like something pushed me the first time and something flipped me the second time.

الإجابة

Here's your story reimagined into a deeply emotional and human-centered narrative:


Something in the Stairs

It’s been over a year since I’ve shared a story with you all. Honestly, this one is the hardest I’ve ever had to write—partly because it scares me, but mostly because it hurts. Grab your tissues, my friends; I promise you'll feel every word.

Let me start at the beginning. Ever since my last story, something strange has been lingering in our house. At first, I thought it might be comforting—maybe my grandfather or even my father-in-law, coming to check on me. But the longer this presence stayed, the clearer it became that whatever it was, it wasn’t someone I loved. Whenever my grandfather or father-in-law visit from beyond, they fill me with warmth, a gentle calmness. But this thing, this entity—I never saw its face, only glimpses of its back as it slipped around corners and doorways. It always seemed to be hiding from me, like it didn't want me to know who—or what—it really was. Even now, I don’t know if it was male, female, or something else entirely.

Now, about our basement stairs: my husband had taken down the handrails years ago. He’d meant well, really. They were old, dangerous—more hazard than help, he always said. After my back surgery last year, though, I begged him to put them back up. He just shook his head, gently insisting, “Honey, it’s easier to carry big things down there without them. Besides, you shouldn’t be going up and down those stairs anyway.” So, I gave up on asking, though I secretly missed the security the railing used to offer me.

But after that entity started appearing, things shifted in our home. It was subtle at first—a creeping sense that something wasn’t right. And then, one day, my life took a sudden turn.

It was just another afternoon. I was about to head upstairs but changed my mind halfway up, realizing I’d forgotten something in the basement. As I turned to descend, my knee—the one that's been troubling me—locked up sharply, leaving me teetering precariously on the fourth step from the bottom. Panic surged through me, my back seizing in pain. I cried out desperately to my husband, hoping he could catch me before I fell.

But he stood frozen at the top, unmoving, eyes wide as I lost my balance. My body pitched sideways, through the empty space where the railing should've been. In that terrifying split second, I braced myself to smash headfirst into the old wooden dresser, sure that was my fate.

Somehow, impossibly, I missed the dresser completely. Instead, I landed six feet away from the stairs, sprawled painfully across the cold basement floor. Gasping for air, staring up at the ceiling, I heard my husband's stunned voice ask, “Why on earth did you do that?”

I wanted to scream. “I called you for help!” My voice trembled, caught somewhere between anger and shock. “There was nothing to grab onto.”

In the days following, more strange events occurred. Items moved slightly out of place, shadows flickered where they shouldn’t, whispers just soft enough to dismiss as imagination. Each time, I brushed them off, afraid of giving power to whatever lurked nearby.

Exactly one week later, the basement took hold of me again.

I was talking casually with my sons downstairs, laughing, feeling safe in their company. As I climbed the steps in my sturdy work boots, suddenly, inexplicably, my right foot slipped. In a blur, I felt my body pitch forward, my stomach slamming onto the stairs. Before I could even register the pain, I felt something—something I couldn’t see—lift and flip me through the open gap once more.

This time, the force was stronger, like invisible hands had thrown me. Again, I sailed clear of every obstacle that should have injured me—boxes, furniture, tools scattered on the floor—landing heavily on my back, more than six feet from the stairs.

My oldest son raced over, panic in his eyes as he helped me slowly, shakily, to sit up. My younger boy, familiar with helping me after countless falls or dog tumbles, carefully steadied me, worry creasing his forehead.

To ease the tension, my older son cracked a nervous joke, his voice trembling, “Wow, Mom, you got some real air this time. Maybe we should measure how far you flew.”

But I couldn’t laugh. I couldn’t even smile. My heart was pounding too loudly, drowning out everything else. Because deep inside, beneath the confusion and pain, I knew—I just knew—something had pushed me. Something had wanted me to fall. Something had thrown me like a ragdoll, twice now.

And it’s still here.

As I lay awake tonight, retelling this story, all I can think about is that faceless entity, lurking just beyond my vision. I keep waiting for my grandfather’s gentle warmth or my father-in-law’s comforting presence—but all I feel is the cold certainty that this thing isn't done yet.

Please, hold your loved ones close tonight. And pray for me, because honestly, I don’t know how this story ends.

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